Emma Barnett Im not keen on the slanted big title, maybe make it straight instead? or perhaps make the white background a little greyer, so it isnt so contrasting with the dark background on the other page...? But all in all, it looks really nice :)
Beth Oliver This is really good! The image is really cool :)
Alice Bywater This is really goood ....although the only critism i can think of is maybe change the font style of the actual writing and make it bigger :)
Abbie Yapp I think it loooks good, but i agree with Emma I'm not keen on the slanted title. Also maybe just add a little more colour just to make it look more exciting. I think the image looks good :3
Lucy Crowther Looking good! I like the 'Becomes a lone ranger' as it works really well with the article and his ex-band name. The only thing i can think of is maybe make the article side a bit more colourfull and attractive. Bout overall its very good and looks professional.
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